So here is the inked version. The idea came from the writer- One character stalking another character. Basic star style composition. Very simple and straightforward, it all leads to his face then to his attacker.
Mostly Raphael. Some marker on the flashing lights. Some Japanese brush marker for the heavy rendering. On someone else's pencils I am much more concerned with the line weights on every object, but with my own stuff I tend to care less on background elements. especially when they are gonna be dropped out in color. The perspective is a little off in the right corner, don't really care.
Done on copy paper. I found this copy paper that I really like to draw on, it has a nice tooth and is fun to pencil on. It takes nib and brush well. But I can only use it on things that have very little black as it is such thin stuff but I really like it and it is so cheap.